假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
1.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I had a really embarrassing experience at Beijing airport last week.I was returning back from a business trip to England and was extreme tired.I could hardly keep my eyes open as I collected my suitcase and start to walk towards Passport Control.
Before long, I became aware of someone shouted but ignored it.I was about to step forward to present my passport while a man tapped me politely on the shoulders.I had picked up my suitcase by mistake! At that time, everyone was watching us and I felt deeply embarrassing.In the end the gentleman, Mr. Xu, kindly accepted my apology to my mistake and we shook hands, smiling happily.However, I will more careful next time.
I had a really embarrassing experience at Beijing airport last week.I was returning back from a business trip to England and was extreme tired.I could hardly keep my eyes open as I collected
extremely
my suitcase and start to walk towards passport control.
started
Before long, I became aware of someone shouted but ignored it.I was about to step forward to
shouting
present my passport while a man tapped me politely on the shoulders.I had picked up my
when shoulder his
suitcase by mistake! At that time, everyone was watching us and I felt deeply embarrassing.In the end the gentleman, Mr. Xu, kindly accepted my apology to my mistake and we shook hands, smiling happily.However, I will ∧ more careful next time.