假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分
Harvard dares us to dream big to aspire(渴求) to change the world. Here on this Commencement Day, we are probably thinking of grand destination and big adventures that awa
it ourselves.My experience here reminded me how important it is for researchers to communicate our knowledge to those who need it. But that’s an impact every one of us can make!More than never before, our society emphasizes science and innovation. But an equalimportant emphasis should be on distributing knowledge we have to where it’s needed. Change the world doesn’t mean that everyone has to find the next big thing. It can be as simple as becoming better communicators, and finding more creative ways to pass on to the knowledge we have to people in their local community. Our society also needs to recognize that the equal distribution of knowledge is a pivotal(关键) step of human development, and work to bring this into real.
答案
第二句destination改为destinations, ourselves改为us, 第三句reminded改为reminds, 第四句But改为And, 第五句never改为ever, 第六句equal改为equally, distributing后面加the, 第七句Change改为Changing, 第八句pass on to删掉to, 第九句real改为reality。
评分标准：答案和格式两者都完全正确才得分。
