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Several days ago, Li Hua, one of my roommate, bought a bag of
snacks from a supermarket. We invited to enjoy them. However,
after eating , all of us get poisoned and had stomachaches with our
faces pale. We were quick sent to a nearby hospital. The doctor
examined us and gave him some medicine. Unluckily, we were out of
danger soon before taking medicine. This accident made me to realize
the seriousness of the food safety problem. I sincerely hope that the
whole society should take notice of food safe.
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