假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
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删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day, Dad and I was taking a walk by the lake when a boy rode by with a very high speed. Suddenly, we heard the loud scream. We turned around and saw the boy struggling in the lake, crying out help. Daddy and I ran towards him quickly and had pulled him out of the water. However, the boy rode away immediate without saying “Thank you”. I felt disappointing at his behavior. To my surprises, the boy came back with hot drinks and dry towels several minutes late. Seeing this, I knew I had misunderstood him and felt ashamed of me
One day, Dad and I was taking a walk by the lake when a boy rode by with a very high speed.
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Suddenly, we heard the loud scream. We turned around and saw the boy struggling in the lake,
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crying out ^ help. Daddy and I ran towards him quickly and had pulled him out of the water.
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However, the boy rode away immediate without saying “Thank you”. I felt disappointing at his
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behavior. To my surprises, the boy came back with hot drinks and dry towels several minutes late.
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Seeing this, I knew I had misunderstood him and felt ashamed of me
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