下面短文中共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在该句下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
As a student,Li Hua works very harder at his lessons,so he is always one of the top student in our class.He loves sports very much that he makes it a rule to play the football at weekends with his friends.Li Hua is concerning about the students who are not good at their lessons,so she always helps them after class.
As a monitor,Li Hua has successful organized some voluntary activities.We pick rubbish in the park near our school every week,and last month we visit a nursing home.What we have done is warmly welcomed by the community.This is how Li Hua is so popular.
As a student,Li Hua works very harder at his lessons,so he is always one of the top student in our class.He loves sports very much that he makes it a rule to play the football at weekends with his friends.Li Hua is concerning about the students who are not good at their lessons,so she always helps them after class.
As a monitor,Li Hua has successful organized some voluntary activities.We pick∧rubbish in the park near our school every week,and last month we visit a nursing home.What we have done is warmly welcomed by the community.This is how Li Hua is so popular.
1.harder改为hard;副词错误.句意表达的努力工作,没有比较的含义.
2.student改为students;名词错误.句中有one of短语,表示其中之一,名词要用复数.
3.very改为so;搭配错误.so…that…如此…以致…,连接结果状语从句.
4.the去掉.冠词错误.英语中表示球类运动的名词前,不用冠词.
5.concerning改为concerned;短语搭配错误.be concerned about关心.
6.she改为he;句意指代的Li Hua是男性,要用he来指代.
7.successful改为successfully;副词错误.句中successful修饰谓语动词organized,要用副词形式.
8.加up;短语搭配错误.pick up捡起;pick是摘的意思.
9.visit改为visited;时态错误.句意表达的是过去发生的动作,要用一般过去时态.
10.how改为why;连词错误.句意表达的是原因,不是方式.