假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处,每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
While traveled to Paris on a bus, I became very sick. A well-dressing man on the bus helped me greatly. He took me off the bus, found out what the doctor’s office was, and took me to there himself. The next day, he paid visit to me. I didn’t speak French well then, so I can’t talk with him very much. However, even if we couldn’t talk, we could communicate. I expressed myself thanks for his great kindness, and he shows his great concern for my healthy. Through this experience I have learned that communication can take place without much actual informations at all.
1. traveled-traveling 主动用V-ing
2. well-dressing---well-dressed 过去分词做定语
3. what-where 宾语从句(后缺地点)
4. 去to there副词前不加介词
5. paid后加a 固定搭配
6. can’t--- couldn’t 情态动词的过去式
7. myself- my 名词前用形容词性物主代词
8. shows-showed 时态题
9. healthy--- health 应该my health 词性转换
10. informations-information information为不可数名词