假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校英语俱乐部的上一任外教 Jim 为你们推荐了一位新外教。作为俱乐部负责人,请你给 Jim 写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1 .表示感谢;
2 .讲述新外教给予的帮助。
注意: 1 .词数 100 左右;
2 .开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jim,
Hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to thank you for recommending Ms Smith.
She is such a wonderful teacher, a valuable addition to the club. She impresses us with her expertise and kindness. With her help, we have engaged in activities of all kinds and we are now our school’s most popular club.
Also, Ms Smith came up with the idea to donate English books to students in a rural area. Can you imagine how happy they were when receiving those books? These reading materials will surely help enrich their experiences. Most importantly, we feel the joy of being able to make a difference.
We believe you are part of why all these have happened, so please allow me to say thank you again. Well, so much about us. What’s new in your life? Do keep us updated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给 Jim 写一封电子邮件,感谢他给与你校英语俱乐部的帮助。
【详解】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构:总分总法
要求:
1 .表示感谢;
2 .讲述新外教给予的帮助。
第二步 : 列提纲 (重点词组)
impress…with… ; engage in ; come up with ; make a difference ;
第三步:连词成句
1. She is such a wonderful teacher, a valuable addition to the club.
2. She impresses us with her expertise and kindness.
3. With her help, we have engaged in activities of all kinds and we are now our school’s most popular club.
4. Also, Ms Smith came up with the idea to donate English books to students in a rural area.
5. Can you imagine how happy they were when receiving those books?
6. These reading materials will surely help enrich their experiences.
7. Most importantly, we feel the joy of being able to make a difference.
8. We believe you are part of why all these have happened, so please allow me to say thank you again.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1. 表文章结构顺序: First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second( 供参考 )
2. 表并列补充关系: Also , Most importantly
3. 表转折对比关系: However, On the contrary, but( 供参考 )
4. 表因果关系: So
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
【 高分句型 1 】 Can you imagine how happy they were when receiving those books?(how 引导宾语从句 )
【 高分句型 2 】 We believe you are part of why all these have happened, so please allow me to say thank you again.(why 引导宾语从句 )