假如你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友 Jim 在做关于 “ 中学生运动情况 ” 的调查,想了解你的运动情况。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 你喜欢的一项运动;
2. 这项运动给你带来的益处;
3. 关于运动的建议。
注意 :1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
Dear Jim,
How is everything going? Knowing you are conducting a survey of the sports that high school students do, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.
Actually, playing basketball is my favorite. I usually play basketball with my friends after school and take part in competitions.
I have benefited much from playing basketball. It helps me keep fit and provides me with a way to refresh myself during the stressful school days. In addition, I learn to be more courageous and persistent when facing challenges. It also teaches me closer cooperation is the key to success and brings me many friends with the same interest.
Therefore, I suggest everyone do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose one that suits us and we really enjoy.
This is my experience and understanding of sports. What about yours? So looking forward to your sharing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友 Jim 写封邮件,向他介绍你的运动情况。
【详解】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在完成时。
结构:总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 介绍你喜欢的一项运动;
2. 介绍这项运动给你带来的益处;
3. 提出关于运动的建议。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
play basketball; take part in competitions; benefit much from playing basketball; keep fit; refresh myself during the stressful school days; more courageous and persistent; the key to success; many friends with the same interest; do physical exercise regularly
第三步:连词成句
1.Knowing you are conducting a survey of the sports that high school students do, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.
2.Actually, playing basketball is my favorite.
3.I usually play basketball with my friends after school and take part in competitions.
4.I have benefited much from playing basketball.
5.It helps me keep fit and provides me with a way to refresh myself during the stressful school days.
6.In addition, I learn to be more courageous and persistent when facing challenges.
7.It also teaches me closer cooperation is the key to success and brings me many friends with the same interest.
8.Therefore, I suggest everyone do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose one that suits us and we really enjoy.
9.This is my experience and understanding of sports.
10.So looking forward to your sharing.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1. 表并列补充关系: In addition
2. 表因果关系: Therefore
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
【 高分句型 1 】 Knowing you are conducting a survey of the sports that high school students do, I’m writing to tell you about what I do. (现在分词作状语)
【 高分句型 2 】 Therefore, I suggest everyone do physical exercise regularly and we’d better choose one that suits us and we really enjoy. ( suggest 后的宾语从句用了虚拟语气)