假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下个月将要举办主题为 “ 寻找春天,拥抱自然 ” 的踏青骑行活动,请给你校的交换生 Jim 写一封邮件,邀请他参加此次活动,内容包括:
1. 活动安排;
2. 准备事项。
注意: 1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jim,
How is everything going? Spring has come and our school is going to organize a cycling activity themed “Greet Spring, Embrace Nature” on April 10th. I am writing to invite you to join us.
Here is some information about the activity. At 8:00 am, we will gather at the school gate and then go to the famous cycling park in the suburbs. After arriving there, we will rent road bikes and begin our cycling along the 10-kilometer-long route. After that, we will have a picnic. It’s a good chance to get some exercise and enjoy the beautiful view in the countryside.
Don’t forget to wear your helmet and protective gloves if you come. You’d better bring your lunch pack with you.
I hope we can have fun together. If you are interested in it, just let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给交换生 Jim 写封邮件,邀请他参加主题为 “ 寻找春天,拥抱自然 ” 的踏青骑行活动。
【详解】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时,少量现在进行时和现在完成时。
结构:总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 介绍活动安排;
2. 介绍准备事项。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
invite you to join us; gather at the school gate; rent road bikes; begin our cycling; wear your helmet and protective gloves; bring your lunch pack
第三步:连词成句
1.Spring has come and our school is going to organize a cycling activity themed “Greet Spring, Embrace Nature” on April 10th.
2.I am writing to invite you to join us.
3.Here is some information about the activity.
4.At 8:00 am, we will gather at the school gate and then go to the famous cycling park in the suburbs.
5.After arriving there, we will rent road bikes and begin our cycling along the 10-kilometer-long route.
6.After that, we will have a picnic.
7.It’s a good chance to get some exercise and enjoy the beautiful view in the countryside.
8.Don’t forget to wear your helmet and protective gloves if you come.
9.You’d better bring your lunch pack with you.
10.I hope we can have fun together.
11.If you are interested in it, just let me know.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)(供参考)
1. 表文章结构顺序: First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2. 表并列补充关系: What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including
3. 表转折对比关系: However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause( 从句 ), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…, On the other hand… Some…, while others…, as for, so…that…
4. 表因果关系: Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
【 高分句型 1 】 After arriving there, we will rent road bikes and begin our cycling along the 10-kilometer-long route. (动名词作宾语)
【 高分句型 2 】 It’s a good chance to get some exercise and enjoy the beautiful view in the countryside. ( it 作形式主语)
请认真阅读下列短文,并根据所读内容在文章后表格中的空格里填入一个最恰当的单词。注意:每个空格只填1个单词。
Feeling extreme loneliness can increase an older person’s risk of premature (过早的)death by 14 percent, according to research by John Cacioppo, professor of psychology at the University of Chicago.
Cacioppo and his colleagues’ work shows that the impact of loneliness on premature death is nearly as strong as the impact of disadvantaged socioeconomic status, which they found increases the chances of dying early by 19 percent. A 2010 meta﹣analysis showed that loneliness has twice as much impact on early death as obesity does, he said.
The researchers looked at dramatic differences in the rate of decline in physical and mental health as people aged. Cacioppo and his colleagues have examined the role of satisfying relationships on older people to develop their resilience ([rɪˈzɪliəns] 快速恢复的能力;适应力), the ability to feel better quickly after something unpleasant, and grow from stresses in life.
The consequences for health are dramatic, as feeling isolated or separated from others can disturb sleep, elevate blood pressure, increase morning rises in the stress hormone cortisol ([‘kɔ:tɪsɒl] 皮质醇), change the gene expression in immune cells, increase depression and lower overall subjective well﹣being, Cacioppo pointed out in a talk, “ Rewarding Social Connections Promote Successful Aging.”
Cacioppo, one of the nation’s leading experts on loneliness, said older people can avoid the consequences of loneliness by staying in touch with former co﹣workers, taking part in family traditions, and sharing good times with family and friends ﹣ all of which give older adults a chance to connect with others about whom they care and who care about them.
”Retiring to Florida to live in a warmer climate among strangers isn’t necessarily a good idea if it means you are disconnected from the people who mean much to you,” said Cacioppo. Population changes make understanding the role of loneliness and health all the more important,he explained. “People have to think about how to protect themselves from depression, low subjective well﹣being and early death. “
Although some people are happy to be alone, most people develop from social situations in which they provide mutual support and establish a strong bond. Evolution encourages people to work together to survive and accordingly most people enjoy companionship compared to be alone.
It is not solitude (独处)or physical isolation itself, but rather the subjective sense of isolation that Cacioppo’s work shows to be so destructive. Older people living alone are not necessarily lonely if they remain actively engaged in social life and enjoy the company of those around them. Some aspects of aging, such as blindness and loss of hearing, however, place people at special risk of becoming isolated and lonely, he said.
Passage outline | Supporting details |
The main idea | Chances are that older people will die early if they feel extremely 51.. |
52. with loneliness | • Like disadvantaged socioeconomic status and obesity, loneliness can 53. old men’s premature death. • When 54. from others, one will find physical health impacted and tend to feel depressive and unhappy. |
Suggestions | • Keep in touch with others and take part in 55. activities. • Choosing to live in a pleasant climate don’t necessarily make sense if the elder are disconnected from people who are 56. to them. • Think about how to57. depression, low subjective well﹣being and early death. • Work together with others to 58., to gain mutual support and establish a strong bond. |
Conclusions | • The sense of isolation, rather than solitude or physical isolation itself, isn’t 59.to elders. • Living alone doesn’t mean loneliness if older people live an 60. social life. |