高中英语2021届高考英语一轮复习易错题型（9）短文改错试题含答案解析.doc

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Nowadays many young parents are addicted in their electric devices like smartphones or computers, pay less or no attention to their kids.

Then what does it come about? Admittedly, the smartphone indeed dramatic changes our life. With it, people can do nearly everything we want, such as surfing the Internet for information, watching films or video, doing some online shopping and playing games as well. Thus, a smartphone serves as platform for them to get fun in a comfortable and convenient way. As a result, more and more young parents are being attracted.

However, something can replace face-to-face communication between parents and kids, which requires parents to think about the real meaning of life, spends more time with their children and have fun together. Only in this way can a better parent-child relationship will be developed.

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Nowadays many young parents are addicted their electric devices like smartphones or computers, less or no attention to their kids.

Then does it come about? Admittedly, the smartphone indeed changes our life. With it, people can do nearly everything want, such as surfing the Internet for information, watching films or , doing some online shopping and playing games as well. Thus, a smartphone serves as platform for them to get fun in a comfortable and convenient way. As a result, more and more young parents are being attracted.

However, can replace face-to-face communication between parents and kids, which requires to think about the real meaning of life, spends more time with their children and have fun together. Only in this way can a better parent-child relationship ~~will~~ be developed.

解析： 1. in改为to.考查固定搭配.句意为:如今,许多年轻父母沉迷于智能手机或电脑等电子设备,很少或根本不关心孩子.be addicted to上瘾,所以in改为to.

2. pay改为paying.考查现在分词.句意为:如今,许多年轻父母沉迷于智能手机或电脑等电子设备,很少或根本不关心孩子.pay和句子主语之间是主动关系,所以用现在分词做必然的结果状语,所以pay改为paying.

3. what改为how.考查固定搭配.句意为:那么,它是如何发生的呢?诚然,智能手机确实戏剧性地改变了我们的生活.come about"发生"常和how连用,所以what改为how.

4. dramatic改为dramatically.考查动词.句意为:那么,它是如何发生的呢?诚然,智能手机确实戏剧性地改变了我们的生活.所以用副词修饰动词changes our life,所以dramatic改为dramatically.

5. we改为they.考查人称代词.句意为:有了它,人们几乎可以做任何他们想做的事情,如上网获取信息,看电影或视频,做一些网上购物和玩游戏.指代主语people,所以用they做主语,所以we改为they.

6. video改为videos.考查名词的数.句意为:有了它,人们几乎可以做任何他们想做的事情,如上网获取信息,看电影或视频,做一些网上购物和玩游戏.video为可数名词,所以用复数泛指,所以video改为videos.

7. as后面加a.考查冠词.句意为:因此,智能手机为他们提供了一个平台,让他们以舒适方便的方式获得乐趣.泛指一个,所以用不定冠词,所以as后面加a.

8. something改为nothing.考查不定代词.句意为:然而,没有什么能取代父母和孩子面对面的交流,这需要父母思考生活的真正意义,花更多的时间和孩子在一起,一起玩得开心.用nothing"没有什么东西",所以something改为nothing.

9. spends改为spend.考查不定式.句意为:然而,没有什么能取代父母和孩子面对面的交流,这需要父母思考生活的真正意义,花更多的时间和孩子在一起,一起玩得开心.和to think about 并列,承前省略了to,所以用动词原形,所以spends改为spend.

10. 去掉will.考查倒装句.句意为:只有这样,才能发展更好的亲子关系.only+状语放在句首,用部分倒装,把can提到主语前面,will多余,所以去掉will.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

First released on Jan. 21, 2011, WeChat is very popular for students and its user have reached up to 300 million at present. It is aimed at promote instant communication among people with voice messaging, text messaging, photo sharing, etc. Beside, it provides a chance for the users to share their wonderful stories in their life and make many new friends. Personal, I think WeChat make life easier because we can save money using the Internet-based application. In addition to, the multimedia communication enables us to share more with their friends. However, we should spend too much time on it, that may bring negative effects on our life and study if we become WeChat-addicted.

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First released on Jan. 21, 2011, WeChat is very popular students and its have reached up to 300 million at present. It is aimed at instant communication among people with voice messaging, text messaging, photo sharing, etc. , it provides a chance for the users to share their wonderful stories in their life and make many new friends. , I think WeChat life easier because we can save money using the Internet-based application. In addition to, the multimedia communication enables us to share more with friends. However, we should spend too much time on it, may bring negative effects on our life and study if we become WeChat-addicted.

解析： 1． for改为with．考查介词．be popular with意为"受…欢迎"，是固定搭配．故for改为with．
2．user-users．考查名词的复数形式．微信非常受学生欢迎，目前它的用户已经达到了3亿．用户是指使用微信的人，很多，需要用复数形式．故user-users．
3． promote改为promoting．考查动名词．介词后接动词时用动名词形式．故promote改为promoting．
4． Beside改为Besides．考查词语用法．beside意为" 在…旁边；在…附近"，是介词，besides意为"而且，也"，是副词．此处应是：而且，也．故Beside改为Besides．
5． Personal改为Personally．考查副词．修饰句子要用副词形式．故 Personal改为Personally．
6． make改为makes．考查主谓一致．主语WeChat是单数形式，且表示一般事实，谓语动词要用一般现在时的单数形式．故 make改为makes．
7． In addition to 去掉to．考查短语辨析．In addition to 除…之外；后面需要接名词或者动名词，现在单独使用，因此是In addition另外；除此之外；故In addition to 去掉to．
8．their-our．考查人称代词．此外，多媒体交流使我们能够与他们的朋友分享更多．可知此处应该是第三人称代词；故their-our．
9． should后加not．考查句意．根据句意：我们不应当花太多的时间在微信上．表示否定之间．故 should后加not．
10． that改为which．考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词WeChat在从句中作主语，用关系代词which．故that改为which．

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Do you believe love is the most important? In the early twenty century, homeless people were often brought up in orphanages, in that they received little love. At one time, Dr. Skeels took twelve children from art orphanage or had a young girl look them each day. He also studied another twelve children who are left in the orphanage all day long. He followed these children not until they grew up, and the results were shocked. The children staying all day in the orphanage were either dead or suffering from serious illnesses. However, the twelve children loved by the girl were all healthy and independently. The only difference between the life of these children—the love,made a great difference to us.

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Do you believe love is the most important? In the early century, homeless people were often brought up in orphanages, in they received little love. At one time, Dr. Skeels took twelve children from art orphanage had a young girl look them each day. He also studied another twelve children who left in the orphanage all day long. He followed these children ~~not~~ until they grew up, and the results were . The children staying all day in the orphanage were either dead or suffering from serious illnesses. However, the twelve children loved by the girl were all healthy and . The only difference between the of these children—the love, made a great difference to .

解析：1.表示第几世纪要用序数词,故把twenty改为twentieth。

2. 句中包含定语从句,先行词是orphanages指物,在定语从句中作状语,指物时介词in后用关系代词which,故把that改为which。

3. 此处指Dr. Skeels从孤儿院领出了12个孩子,还有一个年轻女孩照顾他们。前后句是并列关系,不是转折,故把or改为and。

4.此处表示“照顾”,是look after,故把look后加after。

5. 此处指被留在孤儿院的另外12个孩子,故事发生在过去,所以用一般过去时的被动,故把are改为were。

6. until“直到......时”,not until“直到......才”,此处指他追踪这些孩子直到他们长大。根据语境,这里是表示“直到…… 时”,用until,删除not。

7. shocked “震惊的",常修饰人;shocking“令人震惊的" 用来修饰物。此处表示结果是“令人震惊的”,用shocking。故把shocked改为 shocking。

8. 此处做系动词were的表语,和and前的形容词healthy并列也用形容词,故把independently改为independent。

9. 此处指这些被调査的孩子们的生活,用复数形式。故把life改为lives。

10. 此处指代these children,表示他们的生活,用they的宾格, 故把us改为them。

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Ù),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

You must have heard about Dolly and have been amazed by the first cloned animal. But here came a problem: should we clone humans? When being asked about this question, a large number of people which are interested in the topic hold the view that it’s beneficial to clone humans. Therefore, some other people, me including, are against this idea. Cloning humans can bring negative effects and wrong informations. In the first place, they may not be treated equal as normal people, which I believe will make him suffer a lot. In second place, human cloning may lead in some social disorder, and it is quite dangerous.

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You must have heard about Dolly and have been amazed by the first cloned animal. But here a problem: should we clone humans? When ~~being~~ asked about this question, a large number of people are interested in the topic hold the view that it’s beneficial to clone humans. , some other people, me including, are against this idea. Cloning humans can bring negative effects and wrong . In the first place, they may not be treated as normal people, which I believe will make suffer a lot. In second place, human cloning may lead some social disorder, and it is quite dangerous.

解析：1. came改为comes.考查时态.句意:但问题来了--我们该克隆人类么?文章的基础时态为一般现在时,且主语为a problem,谓语动词用第三人称单数,故came改为comes.

2. 去掉being.考查状语从句的省略.句意:当被问及这个问题时,很多对这个话题感兴趣的人认为克隆人类是有益的.在when引导的状语从句中,当主从句主语一致且含有be的某种形式时,从句的主语和be可以省略,本句中省略了they are,另外,此处也不是表示正在进行,being是多余的,故删掉being.

3. which改为who/that.考查定语从句.句意参考上题解析,先行词为people,指人,关系词在从句中作主语,故which改为who /that.

4. Therefore改为However.考查副词.句意:然而,其他一些人,包括我,反对这个想法.此处表示转折而非因果关系,故Therefore改为However.

5. including改为included.考查非谓语动词.句意参考上题解析,me 和include之间是逻辑上的动宾关系,用过去分词表示被动,故 including改为included.

6. informations改为information.考查名词.句意:克隆人类会带来负面的影响和错误的信息.information是不可数名词,无复数形式,故informations改为information.

7. equal改为equally.考查副词.句意:首先,他们可能不像正常人一样被平等对待,我相信这将使他们遭受很多.修饰动词treated用副词,故equal改为equally.

8. him改为them.考查代词.句意参考上题解析,根据前面的they判断此处用them,故him改为them.

9. in后加the.考查固定搭配.句意:其次,克隆人会导致社会紊乱.in the second place表示"其次、第二点",故在in后加the.

10. in改为to.考查固定短语.句意参考上题解析,lead to表示"导致",故in改为to.

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Classical Gardens of Suzhou are a perfect combination of wonders and go on the list of World Heritage in 1997. People regard it as the sign of Confucian belief of harmony between man and nature. The unique aspect about the gardens are the poetic atmosphere creating in such a limited space. And most objects are artificial made. People create fantastic scenery, using many man-made structure such as rivers, rocks and plants. Rocks arranged in an order look meaningful while rivers, what go through the gardens, give the feeling of liveliness. The few pieces of leaves or flowers are enough to make us feel the change of the weather. We can get close nature here.

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Classical Gardens of Suzhou are a perfect combination of wonders and on the List of World Heritage in 1997. People regard as the sign of Confucian belief of harmony between man and nature, the gardens the poetic atmosphere in such a limited space. And most objects are made. People create fantastic scenery, using many man-made such as rivers, rocks and plants. Rocks arranged in order look meaningful while rivers, go through the gardens, give the feeling of liveliness. The few pieces of leaves flowers are enough to make us feel the change of the weather. We can get close nature here.