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Behind my apartment, there was used to be a dirty and messy corner.Bits of plastic bags hanged on the trees.Broken bottles were left laying here and there.There was a damaging car in the center.The whole corner gave away an unpleasant smell.One year ago, we decided to turn it in a beautiful park.Since then, great changes have been taken place in that corner.All the rubbish have been cleared away.Flowers and young trees have planted all over.Now birds come here to sing, children come here to play, and adults come here to enjoy our peaceful life.It has taken on a new look.
Behind my apartment, there was used to be a dirty and messy corner.Bits of plastic bags hanged
去掉 hung
on the trees.Broken bottles were left laying here and there.There was a damaging car in the
lying damaged
center.The whole corner gave away an unpleasant smell.One year ago, we decided to turn it in a
off/out into
beautiful park.Since then, great changes have been taken place in that corner.All the rubbish have
去掉 has
been cleared away.Flowers and young trees have∧ planted all over.Now birds come here to
been
sing, children come here to play, and adults come here to enjoy our peaceful life.It has taken on a
their
new look.