请参考下面一段材料,写一篇英语短文。
改革开放以来,农民大量涌入城市,越来越多的儿童远离父母,据初步统计,2004年
中国“留守儿童”已达两千二百万。
据《湖南农村留守儿童调查报告》显示,“缺失父母”对农村留守儿童的成长带来巨大困惑,从而导致其情感孤寂、道德教化缺失、学习积极性不高、心理不健全以及人身安全度不高等问题。例如,2005年夏天,湖南涟源县左湾村突发山洪灾难,该村十二名死亡少年中就有十一名是留守儿童。调查结论昭示我们:必须高度关注两千万农村“留守儿童”。
注意:1、词数l20—l50。文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数
2、不要逐句翻译材料,内容可适当发挥,行文要连贯。
3、参考词汇:缺失父母absentee parents
According to incomplete statistics,there are more than 22 million of rural children throughout the country, who was left at home with relatives while their parents work in urban areas.
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One possible version:
According to incomplete statistics ,there are more than 22 million of rural children throughout the country, who was left at home with relatives while their parents work in urban areas.
Parental care is vital to ensure a child’s healthy development.Children who do not stay with
their parents tend to develop unhealthy tendencies both in their behavior and personality.
A recent survey of these children made in Hunan Province has found that students with absentee parents usually perform badly in their studies.Most of them have psychological problems.
The survey also found that these children are also badly hurt by a feeling that they are different from children whose parents remain at home.It is quite easy for them to feel lonely and unhappy.They have difficulty communicating with others and cannot acquire the abilities they should have obtained at their age.When a serious flood hit a village in Hunan last year,11 of the l2 children killed were from such families.
Something must be done to help the children left behind in rural areas.
小作文的概念:
作文多指便条、请假条等,在写作的时候要注意文章的格式(称呼、正文、签名、日期)。
小作文考题的几个特点:
1、重格式,不轻内容:
应用文的大作文的一个很大区别就是重格式,规律性强。格式和套路不对,一般会给阅卷老师留下很不好的印象。例如:信件一般不需要题目,通知和告示却需要,如2010年的题目Volunteers wanted。不只题目,还有客套话署名等。例如:公务信函中的称呼,一般而言,如果是不认识的人,称呼为敬词+尊称。例如,Dear Sir or Madam或 To whom it may concern;如果是写给关系正式的某团体中的人,称呼为敬词+尊称+名。例如,Dear Mr. xx或 Dear Ms. xx;对于关系较亲密的人可以直呼其名(Dear)Peter等。这都是有规律可循的。
2、轻思想,重交际:
这里所谓的轻思想,主要是指因为100字的应用文,除去那些客套话,其实一般主体部分也就2-3个句子就可以解决。这么短的篇幅,是不可能求思想性有多强。这点和大作文不一样,大作文中,如果你没有一定的思想深度,文章结构会很松散,让人感觉是句子的堆砌。而那种连贯性和衔接手法的应用也不会太准确。而小作文,我们要做到的只是注意用词语体以及语域的适当性,要点覆盖的全面性。
3、字数少,易得分:
应用文的篇幅很短,很容易得分。试想,想在阅读理解中10分,你需要在理解一篇500-600字的文章的基础上答对5道选择题。从这个角度而言,小作文的确是容易拿分的,应该成为考生提分的板块。
4、重套路,难发挥:
应用文的这一个特点,仍然是和它的套路性、格式化有关。因此我们更需要用词的准确性。需要我们对语言的语体特点(genre features)进行区分。以免让词汇的语体影响到准确性。写给机构的信函,应该避免使用太口语化的语言。例如06年是写给一个机构的申请信,而08年是写给友人的私人信件,那么两年的应用文写作中,就要求使用不同的语言。从称呼到正文部分,08年的文章用词都可以更口语化和随意一些。正因为这种套路的稳定性,对于同等基础的考生来讲,这部分很难达到技压群雄的效果,很难拉开和别人的距离。也就是说,对于所有考生来说,得10分不容易,得2分甚至4分也很不容易。
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请根据下表中的提示,以 “Kitchen―the Most Important Room in the House”为题写一篇英语短文。
注意
1. 词数120左右,短文的开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)
2.短文要有恰当的结尾,并可根据表中的提示适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
对厨房的看法 | 说明 |
家庭进餐处. | 烹饪, 聚餐等 |
家庭谈话地. | 聊天,交换信息 |
食物储藏中心. | 随时有吃的 |
Kitchen―the Most Important Room in the House
Every room in the house is important for its specific function. However, there is one room