请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Please put your phone down Daddy, we haven't finished the story!" Hearing these heartfelt words from my four year old daughter was an uncomfortable wake up call. How had I let the shiny electronic box in my hand take so much of my attention that it could even interrupt a short bedtime story with my precious children?
It's no exaggeration to suggest that our mobile devices are in danger of taking over our entire lives. Time magazine found that 68% of users take their devices to bed with them, 20% check their phones every ten minutes and one third report feeling anxious when briefly separated from their beloved gadget. According to Osterman research, 79% of respondents take their work-related device on vacation and 33% admit to hiding from family and friends in order to check Facebook and Twitter. It's hard to deny that these are worrying trends.
【写作内容】
1. 用大约30字概括上文和图表的主要内容;
2. 结合上述信息, 用大约120字论述:
(1)科技的发展是否意味着人们生活更幸福。(选择“是”或“否”并论述你的观点)
(2)你认为在生活中应当如何处理人和科技的关系。
【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
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A father’s concern that smartphone is depriving him of his precious family time does not stand alone. Favorable opinions as there are, the majority of Americans today view technology as hazardous. (31 words)
【选“是”】
However, no pains, no gains. The world evolves as human technology leaps forward, along whose process there is bound to be sacrifices. The definition of happiness may vary, but a more connected, convenient, and creative society is undeniably nothing a modern man wouldn’t have desired. With digital devices booming around, we are given so many choices that our minds have been freed to a degree our ancestors could never anticipated.
That being said, to make sure technology doesn’t get in the way, you need to unplug from the information highway and share your journey with your family and friends from time to time. A balance between man and computers will lead to an ultimate happiness. (115 words)
【选“否”】
True, a high-tech world seems a new Eden, but it won’t last any longer than the old one. Putting down their phones, lifting up their misty eyes, and waking up at night, people suddenly realize that, with all their family living by, they are alone. Children forgot how and why they should return their parents’ love because it were never given; classic literature is left rotten on the shelves because no one bothers to look away from their screen.
To stop yourself getting “high” instead of “happy”, read a book, go outdoors, or simply pay a visit to your parents. There are things to pursue in life other than thumbing up tweets. Enjoy a tech-free day and see what real happiness means. (122 words)
图表作文的概念:
就是用文字结合表格、数字或图画作为写作信息提示的一种写作形式。
图表作文的分类:
图表作文可细分为表格、曲线图、柱形图和圆形图。弄懂这四种图在写作方面的各自特点,我们才可以写好这种类型的作文:
1)表格形式要求考生对表格中所给出的大量数字进行比较分析,从中找出其变化规律。
2)曲线图形式要求考生认真观察坐标系所显示的数据信息,并且密切注意交汇在坐标横轴和纵轴上的数字及单位。
3)柱形图形式要求考生通过宽度相等的柱形的高度或长度差别来判断事物的动态发展趋势,因此考生应密切关注坐标线上的刻度单位及图表旁边的提示说明与文字。
4)圆形图形式旨在要求考生准确理解并阐述一个被分割成大小不等切片的圆形图所传达的信息。考生应清楚掌握部分与整体,部分与部分之间的相互关系,这种关系通常是以百分比的数字形式给出的。
图表类英语作文具备以下特点:
1、题材涉及广泛,如人物介绍、地点介绍、新闻报道、生活话题及社会热门话题,试题设计真实性高,符合学生的认知水平,其中学校生活类题材占比例最大。体裁多种多样,包括应用文(书信、日记、通知、发言稿、寻物及招领启事等)、说明文、记叙文、议论文等。
2、图表类作文提示点一目了然,需要表达的信息一览无余。答题时无须花过多的时间去揣摩写作内容,要点一般不会遗漏。
3、图表类作文中通常是以不完整的汉语句子(包括术语或概括性的短语)作为提示形式出现。这样既能够让考生获得命题人所要求的信息,又留给考生一定的发挥空间,因而要求考生具备很强的语言驾驭能力和语篇整合能力。
注意事项:
第一步:审题,确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点,避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步:拟定提纲,创造良好的开端;叙述得体,布局谋篇;巧妙过渡,完美结尾。
第三步:遣词造句,套用句型,上下衔接,地道表达,行文成篇(注意“参考词汇”的提示作用)。
图表式作文的几种形式:
一、表格形式(table):将统计的数据或被说明的事物直接用表格形式体现出来,即统计表。
二、图形形式:A、线形图(linegraph):以曲线形式表示数据变化;
B、条形图(bargraph):以条形方式表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异;
C、圆形图(piechart):以圆内扇形的大小表示总体内部结构变化;
图表作文四个层次要求:
图表式作文是说明文的一种。一般可分四个层次来写:
第一、按照题目要求描述图表反映的总情况,即概括大意或总趋势。
第二、对数字进行仔细的比较,分析其差异、归纳其变化。
第三、找出产生的变化及原因。
第四、写出读图表后的评论、预测或结论。
图表作文典型句式:
1、描述总趋势(单增单减)
As the chart above shows,…
We can see from the graph that…
As is described in the chart…
From the table we can find out that…
As can be seen from the chart…
As is shown in the chart, the production for all products is higher/lower/rising/increasing/falling…
2、数据分析:
Comparedwith…,/Incomparisonwith…:
(1)the number of…is more than/over…
(2)the amount of…increases/grows/rises/goes up to…/by…
(3)the number of…is similar to/almost the same as/smaller than/below…
(4)the amount of…is quite different from…/decreases/falls/drops from…to…
3、原因分析:
(1)Several factors contribute to the changes./There are some reasons for the rise in the number of
(2)First of all, In addition/More over, Perhaps the main cause is.
(3)Due to all those reasons, there is no doubt that such great changes happened.
4、结论或预测:
From the figures/statistics above,
we can conclude/draw a conclusionthat…
we can estimate(估计)that the population/amount of…will 增减increase/dropsteadily 稳固地/gradually逐渐地/rapidly迅速地稳定:remainstable 波动:rebound/wave
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注意:
1、对所给提示,不要简单翻译,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯
2、词数150左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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