假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
1. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin. Therefore, I couldn't understand "real music". After I graduated at high school, a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. There I saw a guitar player play the guitar, which I really enjoyed. He became my the first guitar teacher. It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model.
Now the guitar is the most important part of my life and I practice it every day.
1. learn→learning 2. Therefore → However 3. at→from 4. started→start
5. all→both 6. that→when 7. play→playing
8. the first去掉the 9. time ∧ choose→to 10. model→models