假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was 11,my parents worked in Beijing and I was taken care by my grandpa.I was crazy about play computer games because of loneliness.My parents was disappointed and angry.They force me to drop out.But my grandpa disagreed.He decided to sending me to school and wait for me outside till the ends of my study.He used his own way to get him back from the wrong way.Now he is getting older and older.I can't afford to buy him expensive gifts,and I can help him with housework.What's the more,I'm determined to work harder to make him feel proudly of me in the future.
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own way to get him back from the wrong way.Now he is getting older and older.I can't afford to buy him expensive
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gifts,and I can help him with housework.What's the more,I'm determined to work harder to make him feel proudly of
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me in the future.