假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括:
球队活动;
报名方式及截止日期。
注意:
词数100左右;
可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
I was informed that our school Pingpong Team is looking for new members among us students. I know you show great fancy in ball games, especially pingpong.
As you know, playing pingpong can not only build up your body but also shape your character. Additionally, it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.
Would you like to join? If so, please go to sign up at the Student Union office, which is on the second floor of the Teaching Building. You can go there any time this Saturday afternoon. If you want me to accompany you, please let me know. I will be available any time.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
由要点可知,邮件是邀请对方报名参加乒乓球队,所以主体时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。人称以第三人称为主(介绍乒乓球运动的好处),一、二人称为辅。在写作时要注意邀请信的交际性,比如:开篇点明写信目的,最后期待回复。同时还要注意根据提示内容进行合理发挥。
【点睛】
范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如: it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.这句话运用了which引导的定语从句使用了一些固定词组,如 show great fancy in; sign up; look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。