学校英文报正在开展以 Learning English Beyond the Classroom 为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 学习活动状况描述；
2. 简单评论；
3. 你的建议。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
答案
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，对学生的英语学习活动状况进行描述并作简单的评论，提出建议。
【详解】 1. 词汇积累
缺乏： lack→shortage
加强： strengthen→enhance
各种各样的： various→all kinds of
就我而言： as far as I’m concerned→from my perspective
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
拓展句： However, those who choose reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
【点睛】【高分句型 1 】 It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. ( 运用了 it 作形式主语， that 引导主语从句以及 who 引导的定语从句 )
【高分句型 2 】 For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books.( 运用了 what 引导的主语从句 )
