假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
My father often took me to his hospital when I was off my school. He showed me how his medical instruments was used. I felt so closely to him. However, after I went to high school, somehow I become distant from him. I was unwilling talk with him and often disobeyed his rule of not stay out with my friends too late. The disagreement was too sharp that neither he nor I knew what to settle it. One day, he talked with me or hoped to mend our relations. With the efforts made by all sides, we began to understand each other better.
1. 去掉 my
2.was→were
3.closely→close
4.become→became
5.talk 前面加 to
6.stay→staying
7.too→so
8.what→how
9.or→and
10.all→both
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文,介绍了作者在成长过程中和父亲之间关系的变化及处理分歧的过程。
【详解】 1. 考查短语。句意:当我不上学时,我的爸爸经常带我去他的医院。 off school 为固定短语,表示 “ 不上学时 ” , school 前面不加任何限定词。故将 my 去掉。
2. 考查主谓一致。句意:他向我展示他的医疗器械是如何使用的。主语 instruments 为复数形式,全文为一般过去时, be 动词用复数形式 were 。故将 was 改为 were 。
3. 考查形容词。句意:我对他感觉如此亲近。 felt 为系动词,后面用形容词作表语,表示 “ 亲近的 ” 应用 close ; closely 表示 “ 仔细地,严密地 ” 不符合语境。故将 closely 改为 close 。
4. 考查动词时态。句意:然而,在我上了高中之后,不知怎么的,我开始疏远他。全文用一般过去时,动词 become 应改为过去式 became 。故将 become 改为 became 。
5. 考查短语。句意:我不愿意和他交谈,经常违反他让我不要在外面待到很晚的规定。 be willing to do 意思为:愿意做,为固定短语。故在 talk 前面加 to 。
6. 考查非谓语动词。句意同上。 of 为介词,后面的动词 stay 用动名词形式 staying 作宾语。故将 stay 改为 staying 。
7. 考查状语从句。句意:这分歧如此尖锐,以至于他和我都不知道如何解决它。固定句型 so…that… 译为 “ 如此 …… 以至于 ……” 引导结果状语从句。故将 too 改为 so 。
8. 考查副词。句意同上。此处为 “ 疑问副词 + 不定式 ” 结构来做动词 knew 的宾语。结合句意,此处表达 “ 如何解决它 ” , settle it 为动宾关系,此处缺少方式状语,用 how 。故将 what 改为 how 。
9. 考查并列连词。句意:一天,他和我交谈,并且希望修补我们的关系。根据语境, “talked with me” 与 “hoped to mend our relations” 为顺承、递进关系,用 and 连接。故将 or 改为 and 。
10. 考查限定词。句意:在两方的努力下,我们开始更好地理解对方。结合语境可知,此处表示作者和父亲双方,用 both 修饰 sides ,表示两方, all 用于三者及以上。故将 all 改为 both 。
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